When I die I want to die alone no maudlin sounds no weepy eyes bygone voice of yesteryear Funeral dirge baneful riffs eulogy to soothe I die alone The place it does not matter to me a time is not my choice to choose The way to go is my prize refuse to share the stage Sonneteer retire I die alone if you feel a need to share a song If you a feel need say goodbye Do it while I stand erect adroitly shake my hand A wake be today I die alone If the afterlife you’re looking for will not see a hue in my eyes The last vison face to face is wrapped up in white lace Touch me in the box I die alone Michael Hutchence Elliot Smith ended with no solo encore Kerouac would drink to death on air for all to see finally off the road I die alone I disagree with the Welch poet go gently into that good night Nothing left or absolute It’s nothing right or wrong pain comes be not there I die alone As with the journey coming nearer Tell me all the options betwixt Only Hobson Choice be plum I’ll ride the callous vote My choice my voyage I die alone
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Another brilliant piec!
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The repetition at the end of each stanza is very effective. And I like what you were doing with numbers of syllables throughout. Lends a rhythm of sorts to the entirety.
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Interesting title that sets up the reader for the illusion of choice, and reinforces it with “I die alone.”
I like this poem as a “funeral dirge” to poets’ “baneful riffs” on death.
Well done.
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You inspired this 🙂 I’ll tell you how in the meeting
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