Cyclops

(This is a story I wrote from my latest NYC Midnight prompt. Genera-Thriller, Location-Rail Yard, and Focus Item-Glass Eye)

Prologue

A twelve-year-old stood as close to the train tracks as possible. The heavy vibration under foot as the train approached, along with the wind created by the train as it rushed past, was electrifying. It was during one such close encounter that tragedy struck. A piece of steel no bigger than a grain of sand chipped off a box car wheel and embedded itself in the child’s left eye. The damage was irreparable, and the eye had to be removed. An eye patch would have to be worn until the child developed into adulthood, at which time a glass eye would replace it. The railroad never paid a dime in restitution.

Ten Years Later

The FBI agents stared down at the mutilated corpse. It was the middle of the Great Depression, so finding a body in a rail yard was not an uncommon occurrence. Finding three engineers’ bodies, each in a different rail yard, located in three different states, and all displaying the same wounds was. The cause of death for each man was a stab wound directly into the heart. The left eye was removed postmortem, and a cat’s eye marble inserted into the empty socket. The coup de grace was the word Cyclops written across each victim’s forehead in their own blood.

The agents canvased the rail yard, questioning employees, homeless families living around the yard’s perimeter and hobos waiting to catch the next freight train to a better life. No one saw a thing. Max Marshall, the lead agent, headed for his car but hesitated when he heard a child’s voice call out. “Hey mister, I’ll tell you what happened if you have some candy.”

Max turned toward the direction of the voice and a nine-year-old child emerged from the shadows. The agent smiled as he looked the ragtag boy over.

“I don’t have any candy, but I have some gum. Will that work. Son?” offered Max.

“If it’s Juicy Fruit, it will,” the boy said with a wide gap-tooth grin.

Max walked to the boy and handed him a stick of gum.

“Okay, tell me what you saw.”

“Well, this skinny engineer with a patch over one eye walked up to the dead guy, but he wasn’t dead yet, and started pointing at something on the engine. When the bigger engineer turned to look at where the other was pointing, the skinny one pulled a knife from his sleeve and stabbed him. That’s when I ran away.”

“Was the skinny man tall or short?” Max asked.

“He was taller than me, but shorter than my dad. That’s why I was so surprised when he attacked the bigger man. Probably wouldn’t have if he didn’t have a knife.”

Max thanked the boy and handed him the remaining sticks of gum. He finally had a sketchy description of the killer which he shared with his partner, Bill.

The next day, both agents were surprised to learn no rail line would employ a one-eyed engineer. Having only one eye was a safety concern the companies did not want to deal with.

“The boy told his story with such confidence, I can’t believe he would have the eye patch wrong,” Max said to Bill. “We need to re-canvass the area, focusing on small men with an eye patch. How many men fit that description?”

“There can’t be too many,” Bill replied.

Max continued, “So far, we have bodies in Connecticut, New York, and New Jersey. The next major rail yard is in Philadelphia. I think that’s where he’ll strike next.”

“Well, it seems to fit the pattern, Max. The difference is this time we’ll be there waiting for him.”

Philadelphia

The night was cloudy with visibility decreased by a pea soup fog. Max and Bill swept the busy rail yard, looking for the suspect. A man’s cry for help pierced the fog. The voice suddenly grew silent as the agents raced toward it. They arrived in time to see one man lying face up on the ground while a second man knelt beside him. The kneeling man, startled by their sudden appearance, briefly hesitated, then stood and ran.

It was difficult for the agents to get a clear view of the attacker, but when he turned to see how close his pursuers were, an eye patch was discernible. The fugitive was fast, but Max and Bill were gaining ground. Changing direction to gain an advantage, the suspect tripped on a rail tie and almost fell. Arms flailing, desperately attempting to regain balance, the suspect’s hat fell off. Long, dark hair cascaded down the fugitive’s back.

The agents stopped in mid-stride. Their suspect was a woman. She looked back and realized her pursuers had stopped running for the moment. The killer reached a well-lit switching station and turned fully towards the FBI agents.

She lifted the patch, revealing an empty eye socket, and shouted. “I was only twelve years old when the railroad did this to me. They never once said they were sorry or offered to pay. Now I’m making them pay!”

Before the agents could call out a warning, the young woman turned and stepped in front of an electric yard engine that had approached from her blind side. The agents rushed to her aid, but she was already dead.

Epilogue

Ironically, her final resting place was in a pauper’s cemetery next to the train tracks.

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5 Responses to Cyclops

  1. Well done. You certainly nailed the prompt.
    I like the title, the premise, and the setting. I, too, thought the child was a boy.
    I would like more to the conclusion. Perhaps the agents watching the simple funeral procession to the paupers’ graveyard and commenting on it.

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  2. talebender says:

    Your setting was well-presented, evoking the sights and sounds of a railyard for hoboes. I worked in a large railyard as a student, and we were cautioned every day about watching out for ‘rolling stock’ we might not hear coming—-so your fatal ending rang true for me.

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  3. gepawh says:

    A good premise, executing well. I like the twist, as one would perhaps assume the “child” was a young boy. Tragic ending.

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