She said no with a tone of certainty A tone that moved my feeling from excitement to discomfort Her eyes endorsed the uneasiness of the moment With arms crossed and a step backwards She said no again as I move closer to the sideboard The anvil would not feel the hammer of immoderate assertions The air was filled with a declination of affinity Yet my coercive plea laid wasted in an unfinished sentence She said no as my final plea advanced a cause for reconsideration This time I knew the finality of her response There would be no satisfaction at this outset The moments would have to wait, but wait with one more attempt She said no with slight anger only seen occasionally As she spoke, I gave up the battle and put down my flag This six year old boy has capitulated Mother said no it was raining, I could not go to the park
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God bless all mothers with six-year-old boys! My own mother had two of them, three years apart.
Nice story.
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Yes my mind drove a different path as well at the onset! I will say I love the line “Her eyes endorsed the uneasiness of the moment.” Beautiful prose for sure!
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I love it because you set early expectations for a very different meaning! Well done!!
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Silly, campy little ditty….
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