What was THAT?

It wasn’t so much the sound as it was the feeling that the sound engendered in my brain.  The feeling was DOOM!

The sound was the slow workings of the tumblers in the lock on my LOCKED door!  Sort of a snick-snap-snick-slide-clunk, then nothing.

Except it wasn’t nothing!  There was pressure, feeling, as if something was pushing against the air coming into my room.

Sweat trickled down my neck, between the hairs that now stood up there.  My heart hammered in my chest, as if to flee that which my brain assured was my immediate death or a fate worse than.

My breath came in gasps, pants, eyes wide to accept whatever the horror that awaited!

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the more I read of history and religion, the less sure I am that I have ever correctly understood what I learned as a child.
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4 Responses to What was THAT?

  1. hamiltonsuzanne says:

    Great descriptions…completely relatable

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  2. This absolutely demands more.

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  3. gepawh says:

    Yes, a chapter two is almost required….

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  4. Teresa Kaye says:

    I liked the description of the sound of the unlocking…I can hear it!! Anxious to see what’s there…

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